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Napowrimo Day #14


Another diastic today (see yesterday’s poem). This one was done by using my father’s first and last name to search through the boating magazine Soundings (all text: ads, masthead, footer, etc…) Normally I would title this with his name, but I’m going to leave that out so it’s not readily searchable. I don’t think this poem was as good as yesterday’s, but I found some interest in playing with the elements I had control over: line breaks, punctuation, spacing (I may play more in the future with moving some lines out from the left-hand margin). This has also been an interesting, perhaps grounding, way to approach some big feelings obliquely, as our family navigates a difficult time.

 

real

boats nobody

like owner’s orientation

help make our routine

steamboats

seascapes

learning decisions recognize

to subconscious clues contributing

director Harding

manager Christine custom

postmaster aspiration soundings

experience

Rhode Island to

jobs make

Peter

dispatches horsepower

have series 67-footers

becomes cameras

Maryland different


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