More work with Etsy product descriptions as a source text today, this time linen waffle towels. I had a little time to push myself and ended up trying two drafts. The first is an erasure, and the second is a collage like yesterday. I’ve been thinking a lot about punctuation lately…which strangely enough leads me to experimenting with doing without it.
#1
natural enrapture clear
the breath of age
and every medium
loop for high water
very suitable for return
we may appear
piece of available
waiting
do not hesitate
any note a little differently
made with sun and rain
#2
enrapture better and
better with breath and water
clear forms your home
is a loop piece of gentle
love depends on many
factors up to your skin
very nice and rain over
order this perfect hand
suitable for differently