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October 9, 2023


Here are two poems I wrote yesterday from the same source text, an Etsy listing for rings. The first is an erasure (my choices driven by sound), and the second one of my “beautiful in-law erasures,” using the sentence “See for yourself; don’t stop at the first answer” as a seed.

 

#1

genuine approx. white width
approx. profile six
sits flush to your finger
gold ethically colors
vary as they are
all the entire takes place
all carefully to meet exception
all gold all conflict
all unwavering disclosure

 

#2

white width
low profile sits
flush to your of
solid yellow and as
they are in
all our is
and with attention to
detail and the entire stone
in new all used
to her standard without
all is of in the all
used are free traded
all are from a supplier who
upholds the standards in
the trade to
appropriate and of order
this is offered in other
and to suit your these
as here to learn this


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